Bioshock All Growed Up By DW Miller

I love the choice of line direction/pencil stroking. You did a very good job shading with the girl and the shadows in the background. I think it's interesting that there is a figure behind the girl. I think you could have made it more fitting to the rest of the picture. It looks kind of random to me. Is it a floating ghost? Is it a shadow on the wall? Why does it have a large round face with eyes and a mouth? Everything else is very well detailed. Everything kind of pops out at your eyes where it is supposed to. Good job.